Writing Task 1: The Basics
Step 4: Rewrite the story from Step 3, but add ADJECTIVES & ADVERBS to make the story more interesting. Have fun with the adjectives and adverbs. Be creative!
(See p 10-13 in the BASICs Handout.)
Title:The Love Story
The main character is Micky.He is a handsome man,and he has many bosom friends.He is not only a famous star. However, also he is a PSU student.He lives in Portland that is one of the best city for people living. One day, in the moning, the sun is shining brightly. Before he went to class, he wanted to buy a cup of coffee. The line is very long. When he recognized that he forgot to take his wallet, a girl helped him to buy a coffee together. He thanked her, and walked togather. They talked with each other,and they found some same hobbies. Like swimming, climbing, and playing computer games.When they had to go to different class,Micky asked the girl's phone number.The girl gave her phone number to Micky kindly,and she told him that she was glad to meet him. Micky like this girl, and he was happy to met her.Inaddition, they like each other and they like to be friends. Since Micky met her, he often has giggled. His friends thought maybe he fell in love.
Afrer that day, he asked her to go out and play together. The girl didn't refuse, so they had unforgettable day. At the end of the day, Micky took her to go home, and said, " We have a wonderful day, i can't forget it. l like you very much and i think you also like me. I hope you are my girlfriend. do you agree？You can think about it."
The girl was a little shy, and silently nodded. Micky was very exiting. He hugged her hard,went home .
They were both student,so they usually studied together, ate together, and play together. They had a period of pleasant time.The girl began to felt comfortable with him. After that, she began to took care about him and she was angry when she knew his smokes. However, the girl didn't kown Micky was a famous star. She just know Micky sometimes was very busy especially on weekend. He was a good student on Monday to Friday. However,on weekend he became a star, and he needed to do something that makes he more successful. After two weeks, the girl felt Micky has secrets. She was hardly to find Micky, and she thought maybe he had not loved her. Her friend meticulous told her he is a star, and Micky is his school name. She was very angry, for she thought she was deceived by Micky. Finally, they broke up quickly.
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Step 4: Rewrite the story from Step 3, but add ADJECTIVES & ADVERBS to make the story more interesting. Have fun with the adjectives and adverbs. Be creative!
(See p 10-13 in the BASICs Handout.)
Title:The Love Story
The main character is Micky.He is a handsome man,and he has many bosom friends.He is not only a famous star. However, also he is a PSU student.He lives in Portland that is one of the best city for people living. One day, in the moning, the sun is shining brightly. Before he went to class, he wanted to buy a cup of coffee. The line is very long. When he recognized that he forgot to take his wallet, a girl helped him to buy a coffee together. He thanked her, and walked togather. They talked with each other,and they found some same hobbies. Like swimming, climbing, and playing computer games.When they had to go to different class,Micky asked the girl's phone number.The girl gave her phone number to Micky kindly,and she told him that she was glad to meet him. Micky like this girl, and he was happy to met her.Inaddition, they like each other and they like to be friends. Since Micky met her, he often has giggled. His friends thought maybe he fell in love.
Afrer that day, he asked her to go out and play together. The girl didn't refuse, so they had unforgettable day. At the end of the day, Micky took her to go home, and said, " We have a wonderful day, i can't forget it. l like you very much and i think you also like me. I hope you are my girlfriend. do you agree？You can think about it."
The girl was a little shy, and silently nodded. Micky was very exiting. He hugged her hard,went home .
They were both student,so they usually studied together, ate together, and play together. They had a period of pleasant time.The girl began to felt comfortable with him. After that, she began to took care about him and she was angry when she knew his smokes. However, the girl didn't kown Micky was a famous star. She just know Micky sometimes was very busy especially on weekend. He was a good student on Monday to Friday. However,on weekend he became a star, and he needed to do something that makes he more successful. After two weeks, the girl felt Micky has secrets. She was hardly to find Micky, and she thought maybe he had not loved her. Her friend meticulous told her he is a star, and Micky is his school name. She was very angry, for she thought she was deceived by Micky. Finally, they broke up quickly.
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